Hello Ravi,
This sample looks very good. Border is very good. As discussed some minor changes:
Page 1:
1) Add the right hand side Torana sample to this page along with the border on all sides.
2) Add Garuda and Anjaneya along with the Shankha, Chakra, Nama
Page 2:
1) Reduce font size of first paragraph (Upanayanam means...) to be same as the other two paragraphs
Page 3:
1) Make the line "on Sunday the 4th of July 2010" Bold.
Page 4:
1) Remove capitalization for "Best" and "Compliments". So it should be:
"With best compliments from:"
2) Increase the font size of "With best compliments from:" by 2 points
3) Lower the line with the telephone number a little more (closer to the border)
Envelope
1) In the address, put a comma after 23. So it will be:
No. 101, "Venkat Vihar", 23, 12th Main Road,
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Please send another update with these change right away after which we can move forward with the proof.
Thanks,
Padmini
==================Padmini Narayan
978.263.5315
27 Canterbury Hill Rd
Acton, MA 01720
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